Rumplestiltskin: Final cut

Rumpelstiltskin: Final cut from Fabian Harrison on Vimeo.
This is the final version of our noir fairytale, Rumpelstiltskin. As a group we feel that this short film turned out very well. I feel that this version turned out far better than the previous ones which had a few errors which we hadn't noticed.

What was done well:
Fabian's cinematography was very good because he had great knowledge of how to use his camera. This meant that he could do very smooth focus pulls and other camera techniques.
We all wore suitable costumes for the noir genre as we were all dressed in suit.
The amound of smoke in our film suits the noir genre very well. We used it to add some mystery to the character of rumpelstiltskin and also to fit the typical conventions of noir.
The guns we used were fitting because they looked realistic in black and white.

What could have been better:
Some of the clips didn't look as good as we initially though when we came back to them in editing. We were also low on time so we had to edit these to make them look as good as they could without being able to re-film the scenes.
In my house we also had lots of things in the background that didn't fit the time period such as: an xbox, a flatscreen T.V, etc